ooh I like that! Did you come up with it yourself? Mind if I borrow it for a while? :)
no reason to diefor my deepest loveis you and I
if i never, ever, criedI would assumethat i had died
Bless you,I'm fed up of crying over worries too.I hope your worries died peacefully and have left room for all the joy and happiness I'm wishing for you and your loved ones :>)
Ohh guys this is really amazing!!I find your reactions to the Haiku AWESOM. Have to do this more frequently..Thx, Thx..Vee, feel free, this one is on me :-)Zee, very powerful and yet so poignant..Marybeth, true..so very true indeed and very analyticalMother D, thx, this was just what was needed (together with the howles of the pack of course:-))
not to henpeck - but its a senyru - haikus are only about nature (and non- judgemental at that...)and a beautiful senyru it is (never should I comment on poem structure... its what I do about 20x a week! - edit poetry and writing that is)I love the feeling behind it!
Thx Callooh, Now this I really appreciate. You seem to be totally right in here (off course I checked). What a beautiful day it is for I have learned again :-)
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